Negative Exposure: A Goosebumps Inspired story

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Re: Negative Exposure: A Goosebumps Inspired story

Postby lua » November 1st, 2015, 8:31 pm

i'm going to fangirl in parts u.u
i loooved how you wrote linda. even if shr wasn't meant to be creepy, the way she just seems to care about her brother and can be super cold to others is awesome.
also totally 90's :O and naiiiiled the goosebumps feeling!!! *-*
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Re: Negative Exposure: A Goosebumps Inspired story

Postby AquaCola » November 1st, 2015, 8:52 pm

I'm with Lua in that it def felt like a Goosebumps novel with obvious more adult twists but still very gewd yissss....

I like how Linda is uncomfortably invested it makes it creepy. I almost expected her to be more forthright murderous because of it but I'm totally into how she played out.
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Re: Negative Exposure: A Goosebumps Inspired story

Postby lua » November 1st, 2015, 9:01 pm

i thought she was? i mean, she took the first picture with all intention of having something bad happening :O
i love rhe cliffhanger before chapter 4 and 5 but i'm so glad i got to find out what matt's picture was :O
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Re: Negative Exposure: A Goosebumps Inspired story

Postby AquaCola » November 1st, 2015, 9:16 pm

Mmm true but I think her intent was maybe more embarrassment vs murder? I might need to do a fast re-read but was she aware of the potential for murder at that point?
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Re: Negative Exposure: A Goosebumps Inspired story

Postby lua » November 1st, 2015, 9:19 pm

ah, i think i agree with you. i just think ill intent was there? it kinda surprised me she felt sorry because i perceived her as very cold towards matt?

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